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Your sad goodbye (Other) by sanity

Whispers through the branches Echo as we part Clouds above forming The rain will soon start The children's laughs and screams Echo as we part Clouds above forming Darkness in my heart Your sad goodbye to me Echo as we part Clouds above forming As you now depart

sanity 4-Jul-04/8:48 AM
there is a name for it, I created it myself and named it seicinque, thi8s is a multiple seicinque, the basis is
line 1 6 syllables
lines2,3,4. 5 syllables

you can have one stanza or multiples of and the rhyming scheme is aBCb dBCb eBCb and so on, try it, it's quite challenging and you can use any subjest matter with it........




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