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Sacrificial Virgin (Free verse) by EAger to Offend

A foil dish is my crown and fat pools in my ear casting ants in tow from the front of the parade to the rear and out along the curving frown. The luscious bird hath finally flown with her brothers away from here. The ants were launched to feed the crow on chocolate and survival fear. Escaped sacrifice of great reknown means stones-a-poppin'for this clown.

Quarton 3-Jul-04/10:21 AM
Though a bit confusing, I liked this. One minor
suggestion; "The luscious bird hath finally flown"
Hath seems out of synch with the rest of the poem
and, IMO, it reads better with "has."




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