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today the world is beauty (Pimple) by nentwined

today the world is beauty and I am ugly the world is glory and happy and proud and I am weak and utterly insignificant. and want to cry.

DreamerSupreme 3-Jul-04/9:10 AM
Have you ever considered simplifying & compacting all this into something concrete and comprehensible instead of something vague and riddled? I think you've owned me. I am forever shamed. Damn you woman.




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