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finally i say goodbye (Free verse) by francis nor capule

finally i say goodbye not without reason but with acceptance the acceptance that came from realizing realizing that you never will be free once i thought you were and everything i did everything, though somehow fell short now i never have to feel unlucky i never have to question my being and just accept the fact that we never were meant to be the fact that i have been in love that i have the capacity to care for someone to do anything and everything for someone other than me that i have to thank you for that i have to dwell on that someone i have to find so finally i say goodbye

Shuushin 1-Jul-04/6:51 PM
The repetition helps this, I think - but the theme is so often done that reader sympathy is difficult.




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