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The Riddle of Creation (Free verse) by Dovina

Imagine knowing there is no such thing as death, Knowing you will be reunited with passed loved ones, Sure that God is watching you with loving eyes, Waiting with a shining world ready to receive you. Imagine knowing without a shade of doubt God will take care of His own. What comfort to know the riddle of creation.

wilco 23-Jun-04/7:21 PM
I don't think you've upset anyone (and if they're upset about something like this they're too stupid to worry about having upset them). I, myself, am not the least bit upset. Everybody's searching for something and if that's what you're searching for then thats cool.

I'm guessing that you're talking about god'swife's comment, though. I don't think it was really the subjsct matter that upset her as much as the comment by Macfan. See, many people on here are of the mindset that you should not encourage those that should not continue to embarrass themselves by posting to this or any other poetry site. I include myself in that mindset (although I'm probably one of the ones who should stop embarrasing themselves). I just choose to not be as harsh as some other people.

and hey, mediocre's good enough for me. ;0)




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