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Getting the Cool Kids To Like Me (Free verse) by the codeine kid

Well anyone who uses a phrase like "Kind Of Building My Self Knowledge Right Now" deserves a kick in the face straight away and don't worry Mr Get Over yourself...you'll never be one of the cool kids although you have invented a top dog persona for yourself via this site because you were bullied at school it's okay there there faceless grudge carrier and not very good poem writer because good poems require emotional depth and honesty and not just big and clever words and clever sounding but meaningless codas but then you wouldn't know that cos you think everyone that lives in china is a chinaman and anyway leave me alone you bully cos I'M KINDA BUILDING MY SELF KNOWLEDGE RIGHT NOW and I WANNA HANG WITH THE COOL KIDS TOO

zodiac 23-Jun-04/5:24 PM
You retard. This poem is a soggy Christmas-sock full of errors.

First, you've gotten god'swife and me hopelessly confused. We are not the same person.

Second, neither of us said either of the things you attribute to (one of) us, you fuckwit. god'swife said "I'm going through big changes right now and a kind of rebuilding of my self knowledge". I said "I want the cool kids to like me". If you're going to mash our quotes together like some hideous cheesy prawne-log, at least use our real words. As it happens, I wouldn't be caught dead saying either "wanna" or "hang with", both of which I consider embarassingly 'pop culture'.

Third, your a fuckwit.

Fourth, as it happens, I WAS bullied at grade-school, but now I'm a 'real-world success story' after only seven years of Accredited Poetry School. Last Harvest Festival, the townfolk voted me King Cornhusk.

Fifthly, my definition of poetry is the correct one. Yours is not.

And Lastly, your a cock. I've never said everyone who lives in China is a Chinaman. Anyone knows Tibetians and Mongoloids also inhabit the Chinkish territories.

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