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Litany (Ode) by zodiac

Inspiration, wait for me - I've smoked about a thousand of your cigarettes, and drunk all our coffee and beer – and yet when I've lain late by you in bed I've thought, sometimes, you were slipping away from me. So it's been: I've watched you grow heavy with old debts and all of the things I haven't bought - but wait and see, patiently, a while longer, weary watcher who frets, who seldom tells her worries but whets whatever there is of a blade in me. My inspiration, stay for me - just help me stay that inattentive place in me which soon forgets; and when I'm finished, when I've shown I've not been wrong at this, then all I've got is yours in return, and gratefully.

pain killer 22-Jun-04/1:03 PM
you are writing these yourself aren't you jaime?i mean you and doug are one and the same...either that or you've really scared him (oh my)

by the way your music is, ummm, well, it's mediocre okay. mediocre being pain killer's word of the day.,..very eighties, very jm jarre very not very good at all




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