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the first day the virgin sky is blue and white is the cloud the first man blank the first sun shined and shines now but the stars fell leaving a black emptiness.
god'swife
22-Jun-04/12:11 PM
Could you change 'but' to 'though' or some such thing?
I don't understand the title.
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