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none (Free verse) by poetrybutterfly

the first day the virgin sky is blue and white is the cloud the first man blank the first sun shined and shines now but the stars fell leaving a black emptiness.

god'swife 22-Jun-04/12:11 PM
Could you change 'but' to 'though' or some such thing?

I don't understand the title.




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