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Time Imperfect (Free verse) by MacFrantic

Beset upon by faith and dependency No love for the loveless today Arrangement by way of estimation Time slowing to clutch busy souls A head swimming with gratification Marbles left somewhere in Arizona Poison seeping through fleshy cracks Broken tones embedded in swollen eardrums Night falls beneath an earthly sunset As dawn blooms above a filthy vagrant Shirtless cowboys feasting on ghosts Adolescent rebels bearing themselves Grace bowing to sympathetic cause Derailed principles with true aim A swamping greed closing in fast While time ends at a razor-thin crossing

Shuushin 21-Jun-04/6:10 PM
Mac-Daddy-Fan, nice job.

I wouldn't mind seeing a version that is less of a series of snapshots, less list-like.

should "bearing" be "baring" as in exposing themselves?

So, although I'd prefer a bit more flow, these ideas leave some solid impressions anyway.




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