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"She Phoned This Morning" (Free verse) by ARTIE

As I woke on berth of linen in gray, jubilant charmed voice did herald my way. A vision remembered of soft curves displayed from which spoke the voice of an Angel, now not far away. Oh, how my soul doth yearn, for this sight and sound on each new day.

ARTIE 21-Jun-04/3:04 PM
"doth", "do'eth", "does"; I chose "doth" just because...er...well... I used to read a lot of Shakespeare's sonnets. Ok, maybe it is a little out of date. Thanks for your inputs.
This will be a work in progress as I really liked the way this first stanza turned out. I'll have her call again soon and inspire me toward more.
Stay tuned.....




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