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Navy Pier (Free verse) by Doug

Lake Michigan's soft and ceaseless cobalt breakers, the dulcet breeze by the Beer Garden in such peculiar concert with your silly laugh. It blew your russet hair against my cheek, as I drank the rest of your warm Black & Tan and stared at the shimmering of your freckled shoulder, half-concerned that sweat and sun could make such splendor.

SupremeDreamer 20-Jun-04/12:02 AM
Sometimes you can be quite the class act. Maybe this should be included in some warped script for Good Will Hunting 2 (Will vs. the over-educated buffoon). I know the idea is utter crap, but it's Hollywood, and there are simple folk who have money to burn.. at the least, it would be amusing. (Where would we be with-out capitalism? Who the fuck knoes, and really who cares? Why ask the question if it's born from stupidity? er, cause one can.)

Blarg.




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