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Navy Pier (Free verse) by Doug

Lake Michigan's soft and ceaseless cobalt breakers, the dulcet breeze by the Beer Garden in such peculiar concert with your silly laugh. It blew your russet hair against my cheek, as I drank the rest of your warm Black & Tan and stared at the shimmering of your freckled shoulder, half-concerned that sweat and sun could make such splendor.

zodiac 19-Jun-04/11:21 PM
You're... you're absolutely right, pain killer. My years at Poetry School have left me without friends, incapable of even the most basic human interaction, and with a libido shrunken to pea-size. Oh, how often whilst sipping champagna from impossibly tall handblown vials at my prolonged literary soirees do I wish I could only "tip back" some "brewskie" with a few good "chums"! Maybe I could even smoke a pot! I... I guess that's why I overcompensate so much... because I'm really a sad, sad little man with no *real* life, and probably a gay to boot. You've hit the nail exactly on the head, pain killer. Thanks a bunch for telling it like it is... *tears*

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