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Navy Pier (Free verse) by Doug

Lake Michigan's soft and ceaseless cobalt breakers, the dulcet breeze by the Beer Garden in such peculiar concert with your silly laugh. It blew your russet hair against my cheek, as I drank the rest of your warm Black & Tan and stared at the shimmering of your freckled shoulder, half-concerned that sweat and sun could make such splendor.

pain killer 19-Jun-04/2:44 PM
oh jesus jones...henry o zodiac desides to give his honest and considered opinion and even declares this poem as not bad really and you are grateful. tell the cunt to go rim himself the patronising fantasist that he is. it's better by a conga line of buggery mile than any of the overblown slop that he writes. just because he's half literate doesn't mean he's any good. he's an over educated buffoon with nothing better to do than construct a fantasy life for himself via this site because his life in the (gulp) real world is so sadly lacking.

nice poem doug
willy mac zodiac...honk honk




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