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nanana (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation

Shifting creases barricade a sweet, cohesive form And unannounced, allies renounce in grunts and shouts "We've found our war." And train their sons and daughters properly. Point A must always meet point B unless a line divides a means. Gods and kings alike have seen geometric anomalies. But blindness became optional. So soft stays soft, but hard hangs aloft in a rarely realized realm. This is where shapes coagulate and forge a frame to surround the obvious. A safe place where faces fade with the static collection of dust. "But I said, but i said what were the parameters? You left them undefined. And hence the confusion." "oh. So sorry to keep you hanging. You had something to say, so spit it out." "Um, when I first slipped in I felt my resolve weakening. So, what's the slippery coating?" You try you cha-rye you triangulate coordinates into an arbitrary archetype. And that's why you slide so easily.

FreeFormFixation 19-Jun-04/12:49 AM
yup. which makes it ironic to post anything on a site this discriminative and narrow-minded.




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