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Awesome Heir (Haiku) by Shin-Bojangles

Blades whirl through orc flesh Elven lips tremble with lust Aragorn is sweet

Shin-Bojangles 22-Aug-02/12:55 AM
I expect my Final Thought to be "Oh *$@%!"... No swearing, I'll just say "Oh Asterisk Dollar-sign at-symbol percent!" Anyway...

Dark- Ok, so elves live in the trees and look like Leonardo DeCaprio. You would too if it would get you elvan booty. So maybe they are a touch puss, but the point is... I forget what the point was... the point now is Liv Tyler is hot, and Aragorn's got all o' that (as they say), ergo, he is sweet (and he didn't even have to put on a dress or braid his hair or anything, hence he must be SUPER sweet).

God's- Ok, I don't really care if rambling sets in... it's just fun to be all "Shut up and talk about my poem guys!". You know? Though I really don't agree that the Haiku's that obscure... there's a pretty big fan base for them books, doncha know? And the 'Feature Motion Picture' and all...
Less obscure than a poem with no clear meaning (not a bad thing, but a common one... for me anyway) in a sense... since the meaning is quite clear (Aragorn is sweet).

Razor- No talking about my penis.

Ok! That's that. Pretty soon I'll make a sequel I'm sure... Look for "Gandalf is real smart" soon.




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