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A Strenuous Recollection (Free verse) by Doug

Between longest hour (and sand quick day), torpor sets in the tongue. And this quickening lassitude- dries even up the wettest lust to an unkempt,unchaste crust, of lapse and indifference- of long past passion(behind a hope), of original lick of flat,tan stomachs. Intrigue lose in a ran-out inkwell, dim blots of flushed eruptions. The first fondle of new,moist,electric swell- has turned to a strenuous recollection.

pain killer 12-Jun-04/1:07 PM
Brian zodiac...did you know i've got a masters in wibbling
horus8..yeah?...i've got masters in honking
Brian zodiac...in what area did you specialize oh great one?
horus8...parallels
brian zodiac...oh neat...i specialized in twotterism
horus8...was it hard?
brian zodiac...not once you blew me...oh and by the way...solipsistic
horus8...oh well done that man, jolly good pancakes...asphalt, asphalt, asphalt

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