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A Strenuous Recollection (Free verse) by Doug

Between longest hour (and sand quick day), torpor sets in the tongue. And this quickening lassitude- dries even up the wettest lust to an unkempt,unchaste crust, of lapse and indifference- of long past passion(behind a hope), of original lick of flat,tan stomachs. Intrigue lose in a ran-out inkwell, dim blots of flushed eruptions. The first fondle of new,moist,electric swell- has turned to a strenuous recollection.

pain killer 12-Jun-04/11:16 AM
oh fuckin hell...the boys are back in town, been hanging out down at the poemrankers arms again and jimmy zodiac has got a cob on at the idea of someone else blowing horus8...what a prize pair of wankers these two twotters are

oh look at us gosh wibble honk squit squirt..we are both so smart and intimidating yoinks blurt blart!

Jammy zodiac...now how smart is that? about as smart as parallels

really does get me every time




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