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The daisy-chain girl (Free verse) by richa

The length of a daisy chain is no measure, we are not in ancient rome, one must do like us to live in the orchard-- 'shake the low branches till apples are dropped and buckets are full and stalks are to be re-hung with new fruit' 'or one's knotted daisies'.

richa 11-Jun-04/12:00 PM
The us are the other people in the orchard who are shaking the apples. The daisy chain girl is hearing their voices.

The first quote is the voice of tradition/ scripture.
The second quote (final line)is the other people in the orchard arguing from the tradition/ scripture of the first quote.




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