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Bugs (Free verse) by INTRANSIT

I don't mind so much when insects explode on my windshield. So colorful these small Picassos Thin green wings splay over a jealous yellow blur shimmery silver plays on a fluid blue signature. The way humans die is not so vivid. Slowly browning and wilting. Inside, a monochrome.

INTRANSIT 10-Jun-04/1:07 PM
Poetically, small improvements. Financially...(puts hands in pockets, looks at ground, kicks rocks) And I'm worried about our other Grande Dame. But, little I can do but pray. Glad to hear you're doing well!! Are you staying? Or is this a temporary visit?




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