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Voting on PoemRanker (Free verse) by LuckyJoe
Nines and Tens,
Quite fine work,
Soothing to mind,
Easy on the eyes.
But wait⦠the blue bees will come to sting.
Leaving goose eggs, bumps wrongly portraying.
Whyâ¦Why canât you explain your vote?
I can handle the sevens and eights,
But not date rape!
Donât fuck me like you know me.
Blue wads of unknown foes who vote.
Keep your child baring glue!
Zeros given without stating reason.
Cause they are their own hero!
Mostly fives and sixes,
Nothing to boast about,
Work harder that we will and do.
The blue votes mean nothing,
Just consider suggestions made.
Weâll put it together, make it work.
Threes and fours,
Almost out the door,
Needing some work.
Stick around weâll all help.
We know how it feels.
So donât worry; weâll keep it real.
Ones and Twos,
Thatâs the blues,
Havenât seen much trash like that,
Something that bad youâre going to get bashed,
Maybe the best idea is keep your poetry to yourself?
Or work on writing more.
A poem a day, will keep the negativity away.
Its trash to bash the beauty of poetry,
So I say âGo hug a tree!â
Yah! Saying that is giving glee.
But nowâ¦now I must pee.
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