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Shelter (Free verse) by poetandknowit

Twisted trees dance windy rhythms, dead lake below begs for run off, hills to the west capture a storm front. If i stay here longer i will become part mountain, my skin blended from the hunter, movement silenced by the desperate howl of pines battling to know air. Soon snow will again fall.

poetandknowit 21-Aug-02/1:51 PM
And considering I have know idea who you are you can be assured that I am not putting you down, but only your crappy poetry. I am sorry you feel that way about my poems, because actually, they are quite good and you should take after them. You might learn something.




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