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Web of darkness: Through a gold eye (Free verse) by suprembeaner

Trapped in a web of night. All my life fighting for sight. My eye’s are fake like gold pyrite. Darkness only, never seen the light. To watch the sea is my biggest fantasy. For if I wish, still I could not see. In my head, descriptions and dreams. Perhaps it’s a gift that I can’t use my eyes. not worth to see all the evil in this world. War, rape, drugs and murders, I hear the cries. Our planet is currently in a downward swirl. Blind I am, but all I need is my mind. Always beautiful in my head, no evil you can find.

killingjuliet 31-May-04/10:19 PM
i don't like it
it's pretty cliche




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