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Suicide of the Ego (Free verse) by Drifting Shadow

Every day of the life you have walked, Has lead you to this step of steps, To step into the abyss, The abyss of nothing. It looks dark in there, It looks light out here, but it is as it is, and it is the same. For the years of fear and pain, Hanging on by your fingernails, Thinking, wanting, trying… To die. When all along you knew you couldn’t. Who would of thought? That now you have seen your worth, Now you have seen your potential, And you have decided to live, That the only way to do that is death, Not for your body, Kill your ego, See nothing, But truly see it. Be nobody, And grow again what did not wither. You fear what you will see, When you step into the abyss. You fear what you will see, When you step out of the abyss. But that fear has been outgrown, By the fear of the world you created.

Starsigh 30-May-04/7:52 PM
So now we either have zodiac using another name and posing as a woman or I have reeled myself in another fish,

How do you know that what you don’t understand is crap? Maybe it's denial that there is something that you and your brain cannot comprehend?

Zodiac, so if I am telling the truth and I am right on how to spell it, then I corrected you coz I knew with your ego that you would have to retort with something… or if I lied and I spelt it wrong that was also because I knew you would be back…so you see? Both ways i cast out and you bit once more...point being whatever the spelling I used it as leverage to get you to comment again. a lot of people on this website are so petty about spelling, and what does it matter?

Now... about this issue of you running from my questions and still returning here... are you ready to admit you don’t have all the answers you think you do?

you can go away now zodiac, we have no further interest in you.

So go on....tell them that you won...when you could have taken something for your mind from here, so in fact you have lost. lol

and you'll probably be floating on and off this page for the next few days to see if i do reply to your next reply, but am i just saying this to bring you back on here or not?
I don’t win you don’t win, I had fun, I hope you did to, but it would be quite funny if I upset you.

I wonder if god’s wife wants some questions? And if she would answer them? Unlike zodiac, maybe she has something to bring and may possibly be open minded enough to take something from this? And I promise and not to refer to you as a fish if you be good and answer, and i'll answer yours as sensibly as we can




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