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Suicide of the Ego (Free verse) by Drifting Shadow

Every day of the life you have walked, Has lead you to this step of steps, To step into the abyss, The abyss of nothing. It looks dark in there, It looks light out here, but it is as it is, and it is the same. For the years of fear and pain, Hanging on by your fingernails, Thinking, wanting, trying… To die. When all along you knew you couldn’t. Who would of thought? That now you have seen your worth, Now you have seen your potential, And you have decided to live, That the only way to do that is death, Not for your body, Kill your ego, See nothing, But truly see it. Be nobody, And grow again what did not wither. You fear what you will see, When you step into the abyss. You fear what you will see, When you step out of the abyss. But that fear has been outgrown, By the fear of the world you created.

zodiac 30-May-04/3:13 PM
re: "maybe because you think you got it right... but then you did look and saw you weren't right?...."

Nope. Because the misspelled "dysfunction" above was by you. To wit,

"black fog: Ha-ha! I'm the winner! etc etc etc disfunction etc etc etc."

Then I realized I didn't care, and it would just prompt you to post three more retarded and frankly boring rambles about how much you like fishing. I see I overestimated by one.




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