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Suicide of the Ego (Free verse) by Drifting Shadow

Every day of the life you have walked, Has lead you to this step of steps, To step into the abyss, The abyss of nothing. It looks dark in there, It looks light out here, but it is as it is, and it is the same. For the years of fear and pain, Hanging on by your fingernails, Thinking, wanting, trying… To die. When all along you knew you couldn’t. Who would of thought? That now you have seen your worth, Now you have seen your potential, And you have decided to live, That the only way to do that is death, Not for your body, Kill your ego, See nothing, But truly see it. Be nobody, And grow again what did not wither. You fear what you will see, When you step into the abyss. You fear what you will see, When you step out of the abyss. But that fear has been outgrown, By the fear of the world you created.

Starsigh 30-May-04/3:24 AM
6) And I think now, would be a good time once again to say, loud and clear "I GOT A CAN OF WORMS AND I LIKE FISHING"

7) Each time you return you look like an even greater ass than before, I laugh at you then drop some more bait, so I will be entertained next time I come on here, in fact, fuck it, I need not write, read, comment or vote on this site ever under any of my names because you just might be stupid and egotistical enough to keep biting every time I leave the bait for you.

8)You call horus a rampaging egotist, maybe he is, but notice how he didn't bite? Because he's not stupid and gullible like you are, because in this type of conversation, you can only be either led round in circles... or made a fool out of.

9) No, it wouldn’t surprise me if you were a chimp, and a badly trained one at that, was that supposed to throw me? Your pathetic lol

10) Now you have completely abandoned your own petty rules that I allowed you to impose on me, and even though I am still following them still I am leading you and sitting back watching you...you look and seem and probably like a turd stuck on a U bend…explain why?




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