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Suicide of the Ego (Free verse) by Drifting Shadow

Every day of the life you have walked, Has lead you to this step of steps, To step into the abyss, The abyss of nothing. It looks dark in there, It looks light out here, but it is as it is, and it is the same. For the years of fear and pain, Hanging on by your fingernails, Thinking, wanting, trying… To die. When all along you knew you couldn’t. Who would of thought? That now you have seen your worth, Now you have seen your potential, And you have decided to live, That the only way to do that is death, Not for your body, Kill your ego, See nothing, But truly see it. Be nobody, And grow again what did not wither. You fear what you will see, When you step into the abyss. You fear what you will see, When you step out of the abyss. But that fear has been outgrown, By the fear of the world you created.

Starsigh 29-May-04/7:50 PM
1) Once again, and I’ll say it nice and loud for you
I HAVE A CAN OF WORMS AND I LIKE FISHING

2) Oh my poor little fish, you really don’t see what’s happening here do you? I have now told you several times that I am manipulating you and leading you, playing mind games on you, and still you keep biting, the paradox here is that it is your stupidity that may well bring you understanding because the more you bite the more I am going to lead you. If you stop trying to use the superficial humour as a shield, you might actually get a lesson.

3) See fishy, here we have the tragedy of ego, you know your being led into this, and are probably aware that you're making a complete tit of yourself in doing so, but your ego will not allow you even to back of from a subject revolving around nothing for fear of admitting that you cannot win this and you brag to everyone saying you have won this, when if you hade any wit about you at all, before you took the bait you would of known that you cant win this.

3) Zodiac my little fishy-bitch... some of us have lives to attend to other than trying to prove some sort of point over the internet to a load of people that you probably don’t even really know at all...but I do apologise for the delay, I was busy, y'know, going outside and living? You should try it sometime.
I now see something else in you... as well as the issues you have about your sexuality you also seem to have some sort of inferiority complex.

4) What the fuck has Buddha got to do with this? Other than he looks like your mother.

5) Do you really think I give a fuck what you think about who I am, I have more than 2 identities on this site, you see fishy, it's just like I been saying all along -you know nothing, just like I know it, the fact that you believe and accept what you see in front of you as the truth tells me you are one seriously gullible fuck-wit...as well as the fact that after me telling you I am manipulating you into doing this how many times now? And still you come back because you’d rather waste your own time getting your minuscule limp little prick twisted in knots than just to simply go away...because you are so scared that it will look to everyone like you have lost, when you are in fact if "winning" was your quest here, you had already lost as soon as you bit back to my first reply.




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