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Suicide of the Ego (Free verse) by Drifting Shadow

Every day of the life you have walked, Has lead you to this step of steps, To step into the abyss, The abyss of nothing. It looks dark in there, It looks light out here, but it is as it is, and it is the same. For the years of fear and pain, Hanging on by your fingernails, Thinking, wanting, trying… To die. When all along you knew you couldn’t. Who would of thought? That now you have seen your worth, Now you have seen your potential, And you have decided to live, That the only way to do that is death, Not for your body, Kill your ego, See nothing, But truly see it. Be nobody, And grow again what did not wither. You fear what you will see, When you step into the abyss. You fear what you will see, When you step out of the abyss. But that fear has been outgrown, By the fear of the world you created.

Starsigh 29-May-04/6:49 AM
6- what did I say about nobody really knowing anything? And where has this conversation gone?

7- Are you having as much fun as I am? You said yourself, and I quote "you mean we should just take turns knocking our heads against entirely separate walls" so you are knocking your head against a wall then? I know you are, and I’m making you do it while I sit back and laugh. Aint I a bastard? Ready to look in that mirror yet?

8-what I really find amusing is, that you now realise that you are embarrassing yourself and no one else, coz you are starting to see my game, if you cant see it yet, you must be stupid, and it is a game I can't lose, neither can you though, unless you allow yourself too, like I said, you could learn something from this and it is right here staring you in the face.

Manipulation/mind control...see and understand the conditioning of society, and use it to your advantage. Not that I care or anything but don’t feel to bad that I’ve fucked you around, it's nothing personal, I do it to lots of people in many ways... you wouldn’t believe how easy most people are.
You especially, I told you it was manipulation and a game and I knew that you'd still bite even though I told you what I am doing.

So go on, now try to insult me and tell me that you are now leaving our cosy little conversation. Or have I now put you off the idea of doing that because you would rather prove me wrong? I cant wait to see your next move...carry on and I will continue to lead you into nothing... insult me and go -you prove me right... leave the conversation taking nothing from it -when I said nobody really knows anything, so if you do that it still kind of proves me right doesn’t it? Or maybe you will try to confuse me with some kind of irrelevancy, in which case still proves my point of knowing nothing to be accurate. What I am saying to you here is not knowing, not thinking or analysing, it is clarity being used against you in a game.
You still haven’t proven to me that you or I know anything. And whatever way you look at this, you came and you took nothing, I led you and I laughed at you. I don’t dislike you, lol which I am sure you will be charmed to know, it doesn’t matter one little bit to me what you think, so go ahead and hate me, dislike me, or laugh with me, that is your choice. Now, ask yourself, do you hate me? Or are you laughing with me? Or maybe you will pretend like none of this has gotten to you to try and save you from feeling too embarrassed? Or maybe you aren’t as egotistical as you seem and you will laugh with me? Your choice little fishey.




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