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Suicide of the Ego (Free verse) by Drifting Shadow

Every day of the life you have walked, Has lead you to this step of steps, To step into the abyss, The abyss of nothing. It looks dark in there, It looks light out here, but it is as it is, and it is the same. For the years of fear and pain, Hanging on by your fingernails, Thinking, wanting, tryingâ¦ To die. When all along you knew you couldnât. Who would of thought? That now you have seen your worth, Now you have seen your potential, And you have decided to live, That the only way to do that is death, Not for your body, Kill your ego, See nothing, But truly see it. Be nobody, And grow again what did not wither. You fear what you will see, When you step into the abyss. You fear what you will see, When you step out of the abyss. But that fear has been outgrown, By the fear of the world you created.

Starsigh

29-May-04/6:48 AM

1. What is the point to the links? I aint even interested in reading them, you donât really think Iâm going to waste my time with that do you?
...Embarrass me? Errrrm, how do you intend on doing that when I really donât care what you or anyone else thinks? Looks like someoneâs getting a little bit cranky here.

2- did you miss the part where I said that I am manipulating you? Did you not understand what I meant in saying that I like mind games? Are you not aware of how I have manipulated you? I have led you into this pointless conversation, and you are fully aware that it means nothing, yet you keep biting, like I said, I have a can of worms and I like fishing, thatâs what's happening here, and oh look, I caught myself a little tiddler, you are to easy. Keep biting, and Iâll keep leading you. Go away like a good little dog, and Iâll leave you alone.

2- so who belongs in any hall of embarrassment? Me? Or you? I am just putting on an act, fucking you around and laughing at you, this is far from being the real me you are talking too, so what does the hall of embarrassment mean to me? I had my fun and led you for a while, so maybe it is you who belongs there? My pretty little fish.

3- order and chaos, their is no order just areas of less chaos where painfully boring people like you try to make sense out of things that people like me donât have to make sense of to understand.

4-just like you donât believe that I am educated in psychology, why should I believe that you are married, smells like bullshit to me, coz you have got issues with your sexuality and that is obvious. So where was the point in telling me that you are married? See, you are also bringing nothing to this conversation. What brought you to the conclusion that I want to be a guru? Or that I have a ponytail? Lol there, you see, your bringing as much nothing to this as I bring to it, except Iâm the one laughing...and I know this is getting to you no matter what you try to say. And that is the whole point to this game... you piss n moan and follow my lead, I laugh at you.
And you thought that you dictated the rules to me.

5- If I wanted to, I could actually be sensible and nice and tell you what the relevance of the poem was, but I donât want to, Iâd rather play my game a bit longer, maybe later I will type up an explanation for it.

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