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Suicide of the Ego (Free verse) by Drifting Shadow

Every day of the life you have walked, Has lead you to this step of steps, To step into the abyss, The abyss of nothing. It looks dark in there, It looks light out here, but it is as it is, and it is the same. For the years of fear and pain, Hanging on by your fingernails, Thinking, wanting, trying… To die. When all along you knew you couldn’t. Who would of thought? That now you have seen your worth, Now you have seen your potential, And you have decided to live, That the only way to do that is death, Not for your body, Kill your ego, See nothing, But truly see it. Be nobody, And grow again what did not wither. You fear what you will see, When you step into the abyss. You fear what you will see, When you step out of the abyss. But that fear has been outgrown, By the fear of the world you created.

Starsigh 28-May-04/10:53 PM
5- If I am the fifth person to claim to have you running in circles on this site then maybe it's about time you took a good long look at yourself?

6- Ok although I usually prefer chaos to order, yes I will abide by the rules that you lay down for the time being to give you an illusion of fair chance. And by the way, I find it highly amusing that you said, "Otherwise we wont know who's winning" when my point is that nobody knows anything.

7- “in the precisest possible terms”? Wouldn’t it be more grammatically correct to say “in the most precise terms possible”? not that i give a fuck but if you want to play by those rules shouldn't you first be sure that you can abide by them yourself? These "precisest possible terms" might exist in your world but not in mine, I will try and be as clear as possible, but I cant guarantee anything, I do get accused of talking in riddles at times, and I never realise I’m doing it... just because you don’t understand something doesn't mean that it is bullshit. And understanding is a lot different than the illusion of knowing


8- It really does look like you have issues with your sexuality.

9- No, seriously, it does.

10- Why is it that you need for a point scoring system for this? Is it because you know you don’t have even a slight chance at this, so you put your own rules and points system on it?

11- I still like fishing, and my can of worms is endless.

12- As impossible to comprehend as it may seem to your closed in mind, which i might add has been mercilessly conditioned by society without you realising it... words are not understanding. Words are labels, sometimes one sentence can have several meanings (if you've ever had the intellect to spot that) if words are the only things that make anything mean anything in your world, I feel so sorry for you. You’re free to go home whenever you like, I aint stopping you. Or am I?

13- Believe it or not, you could learn something from this conversation, and so will I... its all a matter of choice, there are lessons.

14- You accuse me of galloping of wildly, what's the matter, cant you keep up with me? maybe because you're to stuck and thinking out and measuring your responses, whereas i just let mine flow.




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