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Suicide of the Ego (Free verse) by Drifting Shadow

Every day of the life you have walked, Has lead you to this step of steps, To step into the abyss, The abyss of nothing. It looks dark in there, It looks light out here, but it is as it is, and it is the same. For the years of fear and pain, Hanging on by your fingernails, Thinking, wanting, trying… To die. When all along you knew you couldn’t. Who would of thought? That now you have seen your worth, Now you have seen your potential, And you have decided to live, That the only way to do that is death, Not for your body, Kill your ego, See nothing, But truly see it. Be nobody, And grow again what did not wither. You fear what you will see, When you step into the abyss. You fear what you will see, When you step out of the abyss. But that fear has been outgrown, By the fear of the world you created.

Starsigh 28-May-04/6:04 PM
see you aint got a clue because you think in balck and white, and you think too much because you dont trust your own judgement.... and if you do trust it.... fuck me you shouldnt if your response is anything to go by, the one thing with me is... i got the brains and self honesty to understand that i do not know anything at all and neither does anyone else, they just think they do...whereas you and your ego think you know so much..whereas you know nothing also but are to pathetic and afraid to admit it to yourself....keep it coming.... because as long as you do... i'll keep coming back and laughing at you...
i got a can of worms and i like fishing




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