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Spitballing (Limerick) by INTRANSIT

I once knew a child who spit, 'twas publicly said: "He's unfit!" One day he was gone... they, in horror, looked on he was seasoned with thyme on a spit.

horus8 25-May-04/6:58 PM
Could have ended stronger.

Needs a new last line.




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