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Shelter (Free verse) by poetandknowit

Twisted trees dance windy rhythms, dead lake below begs for run off, hills to the west capture a storm front. If i stay here longer i will become part mountain, my skin blended from the hunter, movement silenced by the desperate howl of pines battling to know air. Soon snow will again fall.

Jarah 21-Aug-02/12:07 AM
Lmao.. man poet and zzinnia.. this poem has like a lot of comments cuz like me and poet were fightin through em and u and him or her.. are like talkin through em.. oh thats gr8.. i wish i could go to sleep but i like have been like havin this insomniac thing goin on for me for like the past couple weeks.. any suggestions?




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