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Dial Tone
(
Free verse
) by
cuddlytiger17
After years of being verbally abused I begin to feel that Iâve been used Sitting here all alone I listen to the dial tone.
thepinkbunnyofdoom
21-May-04/11:35 PM
hmmm...
seems a little lacking of... Something... Like substance, not so much depth more... purpose or drive, but I'm looking for a better word...
Damn it.
Someone able to help me figure what this lacks?
No vote for now.
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