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Dial Tone (Free verse) by cuddlytiger17

After years of being verbally abused I begin to feel that I’ve been used Sitting here all alone I listen to the dial tone.

thepinkbunnyofdoom 21-May-04/11:35 PM
hmmm...

seems a little lacking of... Something... Like substance, not so much depth more... purpose or drive, but I'm looking for a better word...

Damn it.

Someone able to help me figure what this lacks?

No vote for now.




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