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Shelter (Free verse) by poetandknowit

Twisted trees dance windy rhythms, dead lake below begs for run off, hills to the west capture a storm front. If i stay here longer i will become part mountain, my skin blended from the hunter, movement silenced by the desperate howl of pines battling to know air. Soon snow will again fall.

Jarah 20-Aug-02/11:28 PM
OH by the way.. i quite enjoy this little fighting through the comments thing.. it gives me something better to do that chat with my buds on aim.. welp.. come on throw some lame ass comment at me so i can return it with another lame ass one.. :-D




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