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Fear (Free verse) by Phalkon

i lay awake in bed my heart is pounding painfully a million thoughts run through my head my fears begin to forte i then begin to sweat the second hand ticks slowly and i am without rest the noise outside my door taps most menacingly i now begin to wonder if i'll see the light of day the door creaks open slowly a beam lights up my room a fear i've never known before enters through the door my teeth begin to chatter uncontrollably now only do i realize fear has control of me!

zodiac 20-May-04/6:12 AM
A: I'm not "trying" to make myself seem better than you; I *know* I am. Just take a look at these glowing testimonials.

"zodiac is totally ace" - Steve in Nebraska

"Thar ain't none in these parts what shoots straighter and drinks harder'n that ol' dodger zodiac" - Hank in Montana

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And I have many, many more. As far as "you obviously are lacking in many personal fields" goes, please explain.

B: I'm apparently the only one who cares. *glows beatifically*

C: What, indeed, would be the point? At any rate, you haven't posted anything on anyone's poems except your own and one each of dmzoacan's and Blindpoetry's. Why don't you give it a shot?

D: You didn't hurt my feelings, you dimwit. That's not even close to what I said.

E: Thanks.




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