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Fear (Free verse) by Phalkon

i lay awake in bed my heart is pounding painfully a million thoughts run through my head my fears begin to forte i then begin to sweat the second hand ticks slowly and i am without rest the noise outside my door taps most menacingly i now begin to wonder if i'll see the light of day the door creaks open slowly a beam lights up my room a fear i've never known before enters through the door my teeth begin to chatter uncontrollably now only do i realize fear has control of me!

Phalkon 20-May-04/5:45 AM
HAHAHAHAHA... omg, you are so funny!

A: interesting how you get your kicks off of "trying" to make yourself seem better than others, even though you obviously are lacking in many personal fields

B: you're the only person who repeatedly tries to find fault with me

C: why haven't you posted anything bad about my newest poem "what's the point?" or does it leave you without possible "witty retort"?

D: i seriously didn't think you'd take it that hard when i said you didn't pass the 4th grade... maybe it just took you more than one try... but at any rate, i'm sorry i hurt your feelings




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