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I MISS YOU (Lyric) by jroday

My mother has past, and I'm all alone. I had only one, and now she's gone. I'll always remember that dark December day. For that's the day she went away. The days are long without her hear. Being an onlychild is not so bad. But losing your mother can be oh so sad. I know you've gone were peacewaters flow. There be no more aches and on more pains. There wont even be me driving you insane. I'll always remember the words you use to say. I might be dead and gone. But waite till you get kids of your own. Life's rough without you here. I can't get that advice I use too hear. Life goes on you use to say. You can only live day by day. Have faith my son in the Lord above. He'll watch over you with a mother's love

jroday 18-May-04/7:22 AM
Thank you for your comment I'm an amateur at this, but i know excellence is not an act, but a habit the things you do most are the things you will do best. will you read my poem patience and
give me your comments on it please. thank you




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