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Oomphless (Free verse) by shwenatjadeflower

The Passion drifts away I become meaningless I was naive But I beleived my own lies. I know better now, but the passion is gone. No more oomph.

Bobjim 17-May-04/4:58 AM
WHAT!!! No more oomph. I pity you, have a 10 as consolation.




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