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untitled: dedicated to my soldier/husband (Free verse) by SweetJuliet10

sitting here tonight alone in bed a million things running through my head what i did or didnt say things i should have done that day oh how id pay to rewind time even for my last dime i wish for just one more moment, just us i get so angry i start to cry and so sad i start to cuse i believe in the fight that you fight i know you are only doing what is right i am honored to be your wife but sometimes the heartache custs like a knife i know you will come home from this war dont worry babe, ill be fighting the guards at the door!

zodiac 14-May-04/4:39 AM
I read "my soldier/husband" as "my soldier and/or my husband". Am I to understand that you have your own soldier in addition to having a husband? How does that work, exactly? Is he an "Army of One"?

I suppose you might have meant "my soldier divided by my husband," but if you divide a soldier by a husband, what is the result? A bit of body armor, testosterone, and barely-concealed homoerotic tendencies over 1, I imagine.




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