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Girlz (Free verse) by liljsmith87

There are these 2 girls and I love them more then anything They have everything I want And nothing but them is anymore important to me But there of coarse are some problems Ones that arent easy to fix I try my best to solve em But of coarse I cant get rid of the pricks let alone this one bitch Who, used to be my friend Until she got pissed Made one mistake And she put me on "THE LIST" So now Angie isnt my friend All because I went wrong Terryn made my life miserable Wished at first I didnt belong But then I look at the good side Happy the other girl I love is still my friend And try to make sure This friendship wont end.

SweetJuliet10 13-May-04/11:15 PM
oh yea one more thing.... the poem is suppose to be about 2 girls you love ... rite? well then there is "angie" and there is "Terryn" but at the end you say your happy the other girl you love is still your friend...... what the fuck...im lost i thought there was only 2 girls. oh wait did you already have a blow up doll? damn then i guess me telling you to go get one was a waste of my breathe.




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