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Domingos (Lyric) by candaliesa

It's been a year to the day. That you said goodbye and went Gods way. You left behind many broken hearts. With you gone it was hard to restart. I remember the good times that we had. Yet the memories seem to make me sad. I love you so much, my uncle, my dear. If only once more we could have you here. Telling us to be strong, not to cry. "I'll be okay, I promise, no lie". Saying you "love us to no end". We may not share your blood, but we are kin. We shouldn't mourn the day you past! We should remember the times you made us laugh!!! ---cmp--- 8/28/03

sliver 13-May-04/8:06 PM
Here is this Bow'ls thing again. What? And as far as this poem goes, it says what he/she means. It is an expression of their emotions. That is what poetry is to me. I wouldn't say that my ink stains are "good", but they help with my emotions. Read my poem all there (and comment), that is my attempt to say the same message as candaliesa, but different, forstein?




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