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The Blood-Stained Body (Free verse) by Phalkon

something smells quite dead thoughts run through my head i see the blood-stained body the sheets are blood-stained red i try to leave the room most certain of my doom i see the blood-stained body ravaged, by the loom i peer into the sky i realize i am high i see the blood-stained body and i realize it is i

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 13-May-04/9:31 AM
"ravaged by the loom"

Dear god -- this can only be the same loom from my poeme ''The Weaver's Curse''. Something must be done to stop this *warped* loomdividual's loompage before the situation *spindles* out of control!!!!!!1111111111




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