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Bracelets In A Box (Free verse) by cuddlytiger17

As each night slowly fades away And turns into another weary day I still find myself thinking of you And everything we’ve been through I remember the ecstasy of your laugh The gentleness in your eyes And the truth in your lies I recall just how peaceful you made me feel And how what we had felt so real But as time and distance became our enemy We were forced to say farewell And leave fate the power to tell With hearing the clock’s tick-tocks I recollect memories of you And bracelets in a box.

ho_hum 13-May-04/6:59 AM
This just HAS to be a troll. Surely, surely, surely. In just three lines of brilliantly composed wind up we have:
1. Love is what is important to me.
2. Poetry is about emotions.
3. I'm not trying to impress you, I'm just expressing my emotions.
4. If you don't like it, don't read it.
I am very impressed, your wind up technique is possibly unrivalled anywhere else on Poemranker. Well done.

But your poetry stinks.

In Xanadu did Kubla Khan
A sacred pleasure dome decree
Where Alf, the sacred river ran
Through caverns measureless to man
Down to a sunless sea...

Great poem, not much about love and emotions. Any guesses on the author cuddlytiger17?




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