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Bracelets In A Box (Free verse) by cuddlytiger17

As each night slowly fades away And turns into another weary day I still find myself thinking of you And everything we’ve been through I remember the ecstasy of your laugh The gentleness in your eyes And the truth in your lies I recall just how peaceful you made me feel And how what we had felt so real But as time and distance became our enemy We were forced to say farewell And leave fate the power to tell With hearing the clock’s tick-tocks I recollect memories of you And bracelets in a box.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 12-May-04/2:46 AM
Can you spot the difference between a poeme that "contains emotions" and a 'poeme' that "occured during an emotional moment"? And what's this obsession with saying "bow'ls"? That is so immature, I swear. Your just angry that cuddlytiger didn't finish reading one of your poemes, and now your taking it out on one of hers, even though its a quite good poeme.




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