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Don't Let Your Ass Get Hit By the Door (Lyric) by Spindle

**This is my bow to the Country-Western song** Well look who's back From his trip Well I hope you know What you missed I waited for you at the restaurant Till a quarter past Then it finally dawned on me And I knew you put me last So... (Chorus) Don't let your ass get hit by the door I don't want you 'round here anymore If you really needed me Then you'd be here where I could see That you really needed me But I know you don't No you don't So... (Repeat) When I left I saw your car In the parking lot Tell me what's she got That I don't got? You know what, I don't even want to care It's not like you were ever really there We never were the best of friends I guess we weren't ever friends From beginning to the bitter end No, no we weren't We really weren't So... (Chorus X2) No you don't No, no you don't (Fade out)

wilco 10-May-04/6:27 PM
Not bad, but for a country & Western song this should really be:
I don't want you 'round here no more




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