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Sasha10 May 2004

Very ephemeral, but still grounded in reality.

Good, especially with the natural rhymes

There's a palpable but faint feeling feeling here of Fitzgerald's:

"A book of verses underneath the bough
A jug of wine, a loaf of bread, and thou
Beside me singing in the wilderness
And wilderness is paradise enow."