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A Word (Free verse) by cuddlytiger17

A word you did not have to say For I loved you anyway You sent chills up my spine And said everything’d be fine I believed every word you said I really should’ve used my head You were like every other guy Playing your game, so slick and sly I found out way too late For my tender heart you did break And now I live my life in fear Never again shedding another tear.

Sasha 10-May-04/12:58 PM
I find this to be, through no fault of your own, entirely too much like entirely too many other poems on this subject to give it anything more than an 8




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