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Few Too Little (Free verse) by talking_goldfish

Fire, Your soul is burning, Burning its demons within, Burning hate, burning fear, And all its demons bring, Earth, Your soul is growing, Growing its roots below, Growing tall, growing strong, Growing quick, not slow, Water, Your soul is leaking, Leaking your goodness away, Leaking love, leaking warmth, To another, whose heart youve slain, Few too little people, Will ever get to see, The warmth you have, the warmth you hold, The warmth you gave to me.

talking_goldfish 20-Aug-02/8:54 AM
o..k, well, i'm sensing u don't like the poem!! but as for the rest of ur pointless comment god only knows. and actually, i am english, although why u find that hard 2 believe i have no idea. anyway, i shall now get back 2 more precious matters, like singing the o so great national anthem, (god save the queen) until the day i die, whilst @ home, IN ENGLAND!




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