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love.term (Programming) by ggawrysi

run_C:poemcreator.exe ...<loading>... "Welcome back, ggawrysi, how may I help you?" run:createhaiku.exe "my love for you waits while you try relationships with some other men" define/variable:relationship.def "Relationship- an experiment in love" define/variable:experiment.def "Experiment-in relationships, taking a risk; not knowing outcomes" display:trackrecord.pdf "Seven hookups, two one-night stands, one serious boyfriend" locate:boyfriend.id "Ben Gillis, 5'8" 165lbs., chemistry major, blonde hair, blue eyes" query:love.que "I have no answer" define/variable:love.def "No definition found." search:love.term ... ..... ...............<searching>............... ..... ... "Term not found, would you like another search?" search:secondtry.term "Second Try- the unlikely attempt at a second relationship with one who cast the trier aside" create/probability:relationship.prob "Please define intentions." variable A: dinner variable B: walk by the river variable C: sex variable D: re-kindling of love "Probability of variable A- 82%." "Probability of variable B- 43%." "Probability of variable C- 12%." "Probability of variable D- unknown, no found definition for 'love.'" explain:answers.def "A- Dinner is easy; one must only ask." "B- A walk by the river is harmless, but the female will recognize an advance." "C- Sex has already occurred, and is not beyond the realm of improbability, though previously defined circumstances create difficulties." "D- You are asking a machine for answers on love; therefore, you will never find it." run_C:terminate.exe ...

hypatia 7-May-04/4:08 PM
I find "Programming" a distraction here. This story-poem could be told better, directly in free verse or something.




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