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clay or mud (hertz donut version) (Free verse) by nentwined

is it clay, he asks, or mud, when his rhyming's not so good; is there fiber in its being, a structure to grow the words to meaning? or is it yet another failure that he yet pours effort ...

INTRANSIT 6-May-04/1:28 PM
very well, then.




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